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Review:adluvshp says:
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Oh dear, this was another heartbreaking chapter. I liked your concept of Fred's POV, it was quite surreal. Your descriptions were really good and elaborate. The ending was so powerful and impacting. I liked the "memories" of Fred too - of the whole cannonball incident - it was well-written, and was a nice touch to the narrative.

The pace, flow, grammar, and entire concept of the chapter was nicely done. This was a heartbreaking read and it struck such a chord.

Great work!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello again AD :)

Glad you liked this chapter as well. Fred's POV is certainly a shade harder to capture compared to George's! This chapter is in dire need of a rewrite bahaha! And I will get down to doing that plus writing the fourth chapter in the next month or so.

I'm glad you felt something for this! Thank you so much for your review :)

-teh


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