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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hello, Elphaba here again!

I love Seamus's obsession with Oliver Wood! :) It provides the most laughs in this chapter, and makes the scene in the Hog's Head especially funny.

When Dean put his arm on the back of the couch behind Edie, I wondered whether he may have more than platonic feelings for her, and whether this will become an issue later on?

I had assumed in the previous chapter that Wood used polyjuice potion to masquerade as Viktor Krum at the bar. I didn't realize that Edie didn't even know what he looks like, so the fact that she recognized him from the night before at the Hog's Head was the biggest surprise in this chapter. I liked that little twist.

The only element I felt was missing is the actual interview. I would have liked to get part of Wood's story in this chapter. I'm guessing that it will come out in the next chapter, though. ;)

Author's Response: Hello!! Thanks so much for the review.

I was really conflicted about whether or not to include the first interview in this part of story. In the end I settled to just have flashbacks in the next chapter, because (insert spoiler here.) But don't worry, you'll get a chance to read more about it. ;D

I hadn't even considered that Oliver could have used polyjuice potion...hehe. And unfortunately neither did he. He was just being drunk and dumb.

Thanks so much for the review!


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