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Review:IloveNeville says:
So, I'm a big fan of Heroes. In fact I'm watching it now, and if you've seen it, you'll know why James' horn-rimmed glasses impressed me. It should be a little creepy, but it's way too sweet how he often looks for Lily on the Marauders Map.
I loved the conversation between Regulus and Severus. It showed that Regulus isn't just an evil toerag. He actually cares about other people.I particularly enjoyed when Regulus said 'Goodnight, mate.' It reminded me of Sirius.
This line was amazing.

"Sirius was never so solemn. That was the great irony of his existence."

It was so smart and poetic. I always wanted to know how Sirius ended up with the Potters. I like the way you've done it. I think James inviting Sirius to in a way join his family, would have been quite a big moment in their friendship.

Author's Response: My husband was obsessed with Heroes, and he's been trying to get me to watch it for forever, but I haven't yet. I'll have to try it out and look for this reference. Anyway, I agree that it's a little creepy, but like you, I found it oddly romantic.

I'm glad Regulus reminds you of Sirius a little. I wonder if that's part of what makes people like him in this story. Well, that and, as you mentioned, he's not totally evil. He's still very human and very young--too young for what's about to happen to him, sadly.

I love that line, and I'm glad you like it, too. I'm glad you liked that moment between James and Sirius. I wanted to use it to play more with that characterization of James.

Thanks for another lovely review! I'll be back to visit your story once again sometime soon.


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