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Review:IloveNeville says:
I loved this chapter! I liked the whole Moony/Moody thing. I can't remember how private the Marauders were about their nicknames in the books. All I know is that somehow Voldemort was made aware of Peter's nickname, which he then went on use himself. Weird, in my opinion.
In fact I liked that entire scene, so many things going on. Celestina trying to hint at Sirius, who's distracted by Lily and his feelings towards his brother. Then there's James being incredibly quiet and avoiding eye contact with Lily. In that one scene you managed to sort of progress multiple plot lines.
I feel sorry for poor James, getting a detention from Lily. He didn't do anything. And of course, poor Severus certainly didn't do anything. I'm glad he didn't get a detention.
Is the note from Regulus? Oh, I'm so intrigued!!

Author's Response: It is weird, isn't it? I figured they would want to keep their Animagi secret until it became the right time to reveal them to someone, for whatever reason. You'll see if you read on :)

I'm glad you liked the bit of awkwardness between the characters here, and that you felt sympathy for both James and Severus. I don't like James inherently, but I like him as I've written him here, and I do feel a little bad for him.

Hmm, you'll have to see :)

Thanks for this very kind review!

-Amanda


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