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Review:adluvshp says:
Slytherin review tag!

Aw this was such a sweet sweet sweet story, its put this sweet little smile on my face. I absolutely LOVED it, just like I mostly love all your stories - seriously how are you such a brilliant writer! *hats off*

Coming back to the story, I think you've written this in the most beautiful manner ever. I really, really liked reading it. Your writing style was really smooth and very engrossing. I liked how you showed Teddy and Victoire's relationship grown from little strangers to parents.

The characters of Teddy and Vic were crafted very well too. I liked how you portrayed Victoire as this quiet, shy, Ravenclaw, instead of the usually cliche bold and proud Gryffindor we see her as in fanfiction. I also loved Teddy, he really seemed so sweet and caring and in a way, broken (so different from the selfish needy Teddy I write in my stories :P ). I loved how he was haunted by the truth of his parents, and how Victoire was able to provide him comfort so well. The graveyard scene was so beautifully written, it broke my heart.

My favourite quote was certainly this: "He prefers Teddy, which is fine by me because hes as soft and comforting as any stuffed animal." This just shows Victoire's innocence and how much she values Teddy and I really loved it.

The ending was really very sweet too and I went all "Awww" =)

I think this is such a lovely story that you've here and I am so glad that I came across it and decided to read it. Truly one of the best Victoire/Teddy fics I have read, and so I am off to the Story Recommendations - Ships section on the HPFF forums now to recommend this lovely story for Victoire/Teddy =)

Great job! 10/10
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

P.S. If I haven't said so before, I am a big fan of your writing, and I really wish I could write the way you do. *hugs*

Author's Response: AD! I can't thank you enough for your high praise on this story, not only here but also on the forums. It really means a lot to me, though I'm sure I don't deserve all of your kind words. Just don't sell your own writing short--you're very talented and, as I've said, I love your work!

I'm glad the flow and characterization worked well for you. I see a lot of very loud, flashy Victoire and I wanted to try something different with this story--which is, as I'm sure I've told you, something I do quite a bit. I guess my Teddy is really different from yours, hah! I wanted to play up the fact that he's still a little broken up about not having his parents around and that dealing with the truth of what he could become scares him. The graveyard scene you mentioned was really the catalyst for this whole story, and with the exception of the last scene, it was my favorite part to write.

Yeah, I wanted to play up that innocence between Teddy and Victoire. I wanted them both to come across as a little uncertain and human and in mutual need of each other. This was definitely meant to have a soft feel to it, on top of the darker themes that are present.

Thanks so much for your lovely review :)

-Amanda


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