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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh that letter does make things seem rather suspicious about her death. Was it all just an accident or was there something more to it? Im going to say that there is something more. I like Al and Lily, they seem to have a rather sweet brother/sister relationship. You can tell that he does care for her and doesnt want her to end up hurt by scorp again.

I like how you are already pulling the readers in to the mystery of what actually happened to narcissa. And you are adding in more for the back story of what happened for your main characters before your story starts like with lily and scorpius. I think is a great story so far and has kept my interest. I look forward to reading more. Great job.

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you, SC. I'm glad you find that the mystery is continuing to build here. The story is a Lily/Scorp fic, but the pairing isn't the main plot. Her feelings for him propel Lily to do things, but the mystery at large is supposed to take center stage.

I'm so happy you liked Al and Lily here. They do care for each other, but that doesn't mean they always get along. Thank you so much for the R&R.

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