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Review:CassiePotter says:
Gabbie this chapter was brilliant! I loved it! I think this chapter showed how well you write Percy, and what a little firecracker Audrey is! Not that we didn't already know that ;)
And they FINALLY snogged. I've been waiting so long for that! You can tell that they obviously liked each other, so they just needed to get on with it and admit it! So I'm happy that that's happened and that Audrey and Percy are going to get to know each other better!
But I'm still insanely curious as to when he's going to tell her he's a wizard. I mean, he's never had pizza and barely knows what a movie is. She's going to figure it out sooner or later if he doesn't just tell her! Haha. But hopefully he will tell her, and it will be soon!
This chapter was fabulous, and I can't wait to see what happens next! And your next update is my lovely Blaise! Yay! Haha. TFD is next for me, and then back to LMT! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Welcome back from a rather long break! I hadn't updated this chapter in a while and alot of people hopped on it last night and it was like one in the morning. Hahahah.
Ooh, I had so much fun writing Percy and Audrey in this chapter. Their attraction to one another is really spiraling out of control and the connection they want with someone just pushes them closer together. :3
They almost did alot of things in that alley, didn't they?! Aside from snogging, that is. Hehehehe. Cause I'm naughty like that.
I love that Percy and Audrey are going to get to know each other better too, their relationship has the potential to turn into something more. Ah. Well, I have another chapter to get posted and the chapter after THAT will finally be the one where Percy reveals his true colors. It won't be pretty. >:D
Audrey has to figure it out sooner or later but she's not quite sure what he might be. I think the guessing of it is more fun than the actual thing though. Hahaha.
I'll be back to this after updating for my other stuff. Got Albus and Abandon to post and I've got to actually type the next chapter of "Memories".eventually. Hahaha.
But yes, you'll get to see your precious Blaise soon! Mwhahahhaa. That chapter is going to make you hate me a little, I just know it. :D
Whoo! TFD? AND LMT? Yes!
Thanks for the review, you're a doll!
Much love,

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