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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Oooh Pansy's defensive! And Draco's going to have some trouble not falling for Hermione if she looks like that! ;) Just a suggestion I have is to have longer chapters and make sure the characters sound a little bit more like they actually do, just to make it seem more plausible. Other than that, I really like this story so far. :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you :) I've had a lot of trouble trying to make my chapters the right length so I will definitely take your advice on that. I've just read through the chapter and I see what you mean about the characters not sounding like they do in Harry Potter. I will try and work on that :) Thank you for the great advice and for reading my story :D

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