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Review:my_voice_rising says:
Hello! I'm so happy to see an update!

That was a really clever transition between flashback and current day in the Ravenclaw common room. I think it's really hard to pull of flashbacks in stories in the first place but that was brilliantly done!

I really like your description of the Ravenclaw common room; I don't think I've ever seen so much detail about it, actually.

This story already has a lot of plot and sub-plot revealed; I really want to know what the device that Autumn found was... So was it in a collective cupboard where all the sixth-years keep their shoes? I'm confused. But your idea of Bill and Fleur being divorced is really sad and yet, I think, entirely possible.

I've actually never heard that song so I decided to listen to it as I read the rest of this chapter xD and I have to say that it suits the mood of the story quite well, in my opinion.

I think you've really captured the spirit of young people very well... I know that sounds weird, but I think you've got a well-rounded cast here, and that's very impressive feat considering how big it is! From the fact that they keep shoes under the sink at home, to the fact that money is tight but they still want to buy their mum a decent present, to differing opinions on professors, and how Summer's betting problem... I think I like this story even more than W&W (EVEN THOUGH YOU MUST UPDATE THAT ONE TOO!) But I wonder what's going on with Fern? She seems to be the black sheep of the family.

So many questions that need answering! But I'm so happy to see a new chapter from you! Can't wait for the next. :3

(lol@noodle necklace.)

Author's Response: I'm so, so sorry for taking this long to respond...

Ah, the Ravenclaw common room. I have such a precise image of it in my head, and putting my thoughts onto paper is way too much fun.

That device (which you will find out more about fairly soon) was in a cupboard that the girls share. It doesn't make sense to me that students would keep their stuff stashed away in trunks, for some reason.

And yes, Bill and Fleur, I have no idea what pushed me to imagine them divorced.

Aaah, Fern is the big mystery, isn't she? Again, more to come soon!

Thank you for yet another of your awesome reviews :)


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