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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm from the review tag!

Aw, this story was just completly adorable! I really liked how you started the story by listing all of Teddy's problems, as it makes you wonder why Victoire's one.

I thought it was really nice, how you wrote about how much the Potter/Weasley clan meant so much Teddy.
It just shows that even though him and Harry both had similar circumstances, both orphaned, both brought up by relatives, Teddy's seemed to have a much nicer one. It's like Harry was brought into a troubled society so he had a troubled upbringing, whereas Teddy was brought into an almost Voldemort free one, so his upbringing was a lot happier.

I liked how you showed Teddy's gradual relisation that he was in love with Victoire, I thought his hair colour changing was a genius idea! I thought it was great twist that it was in fact Victoire who made the first move as it was completly unexpected.

Overall I thought this story was great as it was really adorable and funny! I reall enjoyed reading it as who couldn't love Teddy and Victoire?

Author's Response: Thank you! I aimed for adorable for this one.

I was worried that the start of the story might make Teddy sound like a bit of a whiner, so I'm chuffed that you liked it!

And I really think that the Potter/Weasley clan would mean so much to him. You're right - Teddy's born and bred in different world to Harry's, not just sans Voldemort, but surrounded by lots of people who love and care for him, but I still think he'd realise how alone he could have been, so he'd really appreciate his closeness with his godfather's family!

God. The Teddy/Victoire thing took me a ridiculously inordinate amount of time to write! I'm happy to hear that you liked the hair change thing - I thought it was pretty cute!

And I reckon that Victoire's the type to make the first move - especially with Ted!

And you're right - who couldn't love Teddy and Victoire?

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