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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm from the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

I immediatly liked how you set in Paris, as I tend to and I think most other people tend to forget as well that Dom and Victoire are actually half French so it was nice to show their connection to the country.

I thought Dom was a prefect character, you couldn't help but fall in love with her free spirit. She seemed so determined to follow her own path and I really enjoyed that. She contrasted so much to the rather rigid Victoire who seemed a bit controlling, especially on Teddy's hair colour!

I did notice once or twice you forget to use capitals so if you just read it through again you could get rid of those :)

I thought it was a great twist with Victoire announcing she wasn't in love with Teddy after all. I had been guessing from the start that Dom's affections for Teddy may not be just platonic so it was nice to be proved right:) And with Teddy announcing his love for Dom, I certainly did not expect that.

I always thought that Victoire and Teddy seemed a bit of an odd pairing so I was really glad that you paired him with Dom as I think they suite each other much better! Anyway I really enjoyed this story it provided a lot of drama and was very entertaining to read:)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I wrote this story with the specific goal of wanting to break out of Teddy/Victoire cliches, so I'm happy you liked the twist. I remember loving Dom's character as I wrote it, so that was also good to hear. It's been awhile since I wrote it, though, so I'm sure there are tons of revisions to be made, along with those typos you caught.

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