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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
OH WOW! This first chapter was just amazing! I'm sucked in and absolutely in love with your Rose and Scorpius! This is so original and just crazy awesome! Your story telling skills in this chapter are just mind blowing! I'm in love with this story already. I love where you have it started, and hopefully where you have it going. I loved the flashbacks, they were so well placed and helped to ground me into your story even more. I love how she could be smart like Hermione but she just doesn't put in the amount of time that is needed to get those grades and loves her father and would side with him. Its really sweet! I also love that you have Rose wanting to go off for a job and an adventure before she wants to settle down, thats so realistic to me that she would want to see the world, do something, before she were to settle down. Besides its not as if she told Scorp out right no she didn't want to marry him, just that she needed this experience first and that he could come with her if she meant that much to him, but it was him to make the choice that he didn't want to wait or go with. So I think its safe to say that you understand just how much I have fallen in love with this story in this first chapter because its amazing! I look forward to reading more of this story, and others of yours, this year! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: :O There's so much liking and loving in this review that I don't know what to say! Thank you very much for all of the compliments - it's fantastic to hear that you've enjoyed this first chapter so much. ^_^

It was something completely different for me to write, but I felt strongly about giving Rose that "out", allowing her to explore the world for herself instead of rushing into a relationship that she wasn't ready for. She has her parents' love of adventure, and it's important to her that she finds her own place in the world, apart from her wide-spread family so that she can finally be an individual. You've reminded me how many different things I was working with in this chapter, all of the cliches of next-generation and/or Scorose stories, as well as the realistic problems of growing up in a large family. I'm pleased to hear that you liked the realism of Rose's choice. :D

I hope that you enjoy the rest of the as much! It'll be great to see what you think of it!


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