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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi again!

It was really nice being back in Charlie's PoV, and even more so to see Tori through her eyes.

I'm really curious about the little thing you mentioned in the photo of Tori, with her looking past James at something else and her smile looked real. So what exactly was making that smile real? I'm excited to find out.

I definitely feel like you're connecting a few dots, while drawing more. There has to be something much more to this James Tori Albus love triangle than the twins know. But what would make it drive Albus and James to the point of no longer speaking? Did Albus really like Tori the way the girls say, or was Tori the one to like Albus? Did the advance toward him while with James? So many questions, i love the mystery you put into it. It makes each chapter such an excitement!

I love the little group of friends you're building for Charlie. Honestly, I hope that Tori doesn't come back. If she does, i hope everyone realizes how fake she was.

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Hello!
I have to admit, I do prefer writing Charlie over Tori-she's just so fun!

Oooh yes, the photo! More will be time, I promise. It makes me super excited that you're asking all these questions, and I really hope you read on!


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