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Review:batsoulini says:
Exceptional writing! This chapter was easy to read and interesting from the beginning!

I enjoyed the description of the Arithmancy lesson, being a math student myself!
Pythagoras was one of the most important figures of Mathematics in the early years! Good job in general for the miscellaneous details you provided inyour text! I'm impressed by the the details, marvellous job!

As for your story, you follow exactly the plot of the books! POA is my favorite, the first Harry Potter book, i've ever read and i'm quite sentimental about it! If i would find an error to the plot i would pointed out, and believe there is none! ;)

You portrayed Trelawney so good as well... Weird and crazy as she was described by the one and only JK Rowling!

I strongly believe that details are the fundamental piece that make a story stand out! You succeded in that!

If i could grade this with 100/10 i would have done it! You are an talented writer, you seize to amaze me with every chapter!

Can't wait for your next update!
P.S. I think this is my longest review ever... LOL
I hope i avoided plagiarism!

Greetings from Greeting

Author's Response: I'm flattered at your kind words! I actually did a lot more research than I usually do for chapters here, but I already had a bit of background for the Arithmancy part (I minored in mathematics in college- good times). It's simply wonderful hearing that my time and energy doing the research was well spent!

My goal for this story is to slide Sally-Anne between the pages (and sometimes between the paragraphs) of the book without getting into copyright territory or making this story too boring. I love PoA too simply because we're introduced to the Marauders in this book (which I plan to exploit).

I just can't say thank you enough! This is definitely a 'feel-good' review, making me feel proud that I wrote and posted this chapter in the first place! So thank you! My goal is to have more updates than just one per month like what's happened with these first three chapters! (Oops!) :)

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