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Review:Yolanda Yaxley the Yuletide Yak says:
Oh, this was absolutely amazing! It totally lived up to my hopes of what the Marauders would be like, and it was so interesting to have scenes featuring Sirius and them juxtaposed with scenes of the castle.

The fact that James was so against Sirius - in the beginning, anyway - was really refreshing! I felt torn between laughing at his ridiculous airs and how he kept talking down to Sirius, and feeling sorry for poor Sirius, who hardly needed to be picked on because of his birth.

I thought you translated Remus and Peter across marvellously, too - Peter was pudgy and followed James but could be too cruel, and Remus was just... I always love how you write him, but his role in comforting Sirius and helping him to get along seemed especially poignant here ♥

Dumbledore's search for Orion's true death cause has me on tenterhooks! The suspense is so well-written that even though I know exactly how it ends, I'm still squirming for Dumbledore and Kreacher to make their stand and realise that Cygnus is certainly behind it already.

It was a wonderful chapter to read, and I can't wait to read the next! [Also - I am very sorry for the lateness of this/these reviews :( ]

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