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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:

I'm back and I'm so happy that this got validated! I'd been wondering how that date was going to end and it went in a funny, although different direction than I would have thought. Darcy is starting to notice things about Louis that she would rather not, I'm guessing. I mean, his eyes? She was so horrified by the thought that I had to laugh a little at it because I could feel her pain. Hahaha.
Louis surprised me in this chapter too though, he wasn't nearly as bad as I thought he'd be. He seems to actually like Darcy and I knowt hat her not being interested really bruises his ego. And yet, what is he going to do to make sure that she notices him? I can only wonder. Hehehe. That Towel Incident can still be used sometime in the future you know! ;)
I have a feeling that Louis is a liar...
But Lys and Lucy! Too cute! I'm sort of anxious for him to admit to his feelings for her but Darcy is suddenly thinking that it might be her duty to do it for him. I'm not sure if this is a good idea, it might not work out as well as she might think but I'm curious to know what you'll do with it. :D
Darcy's comebacks were the greatest, I had to nod my head in approval, though she didn't get her dramatic exit. Darn. Hahahah.
There were some grammar things in the beginning but the pacing is great and I'm so in love with the way you have this story. Can't wait for more! Let me know on the forums! Hopefully, I'll have something for you to read soon. Gosh, Audrey, be validated and stop being naughty! >_<
Much love,

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I loved writing it, and was having a ball writing Darcy in such an uncomfortable situation! Yes, she is starting to notice some things she would rather forget... I mean, who in their right mind could compliment Louis? ;)
Louis did tone things down a bit, but he definitely isn't through with torturing Darcy. He's nothing if not determined! And don't you worry, the Towel Incident is far from forgotten! Haha.
Lys and Lucy are also starting to get closer, aren't they? Lysander wants them to, anyway. And Darcy is going to help bump them along, too. She can't stay out of anything for too long, can she?
I'm so glad you liked this story and left such a sweet review! TFD should be up soon and then back to LMT! See you on the forums :)
Cassie :)

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