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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :) Sorry about being a bit delayed with this review! And it's most definitely not a jerk move - please keep requesting because I love this story!!

You have such a talent for writing. I can't tell you how much I enjoy reading Edie's inner musings. The way you write has this awesome combo of wit and sarcasm and is just amazing to read. Edie is definitely one of the best OC's I've read.

I really liked hearing about the magical typewriter. It was great to see you take an ordinary object and give it the magical qualities it needed to fit in the wizarding world. It sounds like a really fun contraption though!

Oh Wood! Is it wrong that I still find him adorable even though he was a drunken arragant idiot? Because I kind of do! When he said about flattering uniforms for Knight Bus drivers I couldn't help but laugh. Bless him! I hope there is a good reason why he is being the way he is and why he didn't give that money. I just don't want him to be the bad guy though!

When Edie made the copies of the article with the water-resistant, flame-retardant and tear-proof charms on them I had to smile. You have made it so clear how much she wants the job and how much it means to her so I hope she finds her way through!

Leaving it on a bit of a cliff hanger though! That's just mean. I can't wait to read more!

Oh - and I'd to learn the no calorie charm please!

Another amazing chapter!

Lauren

Author's Response: Hello!!

Wow, thank you so much! I really hope to be a published author some day, so your comments are definitely meaningful. Thank you again so very much for your kind words.

One very helpful reviewer mentioned how my story was lacking a lot of the tidbits of magic that made stories a part of the HP fandom, so I went back and created a magical typewriter, no-calorie charms, the little stainless steel cauldrons, etc. I'm glad you found them amusing!

And you're totally right; I was trying to show the feeling of wanting something more than anything and not being able to have it, whilst other less-grateful people have all the fun. ;)

Thank you again so very much. I'm so glad you like Edie and my story. And as for Oliver's refusal to make a donation, that will certainly come up again within the story!


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