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Review:Elleinad says:
I loved this. This story is just so sweet but so sad. Its like seeing a dead tree that used to be full of life, or a dry waterbed. Its very poetic in its contrasts. She lost a husband, he lost his son. She wants to comfort amend be their for each other and he tries to stay away. He can't find the words that are characteristic of him and neither can she. She expresses the lack of understanding in the books she always turns to. You`ve written everything the opposite of what someone would expect. Only a few things can bring two people together so swiftly. You managed to find one I except without complaint. Shared grief and a mutual experience in something unexplainable can bring them together. Thank you, most sincerely, for this beautiful work of written art.

Author's Response: Elleinad,

My apologies for the embarrassingly long time for my response. I'm terribly sorry.

Your review is beautiful in it's own right. Your metaphoric descriptions are just beautiful. It's as if something that should be beautiful has gone tragic. It's very creative and poetic in thinking of my story that way.

Yes, they both cannot find the words that are characteristic of them. Grief has certainly changed things and has thrown them off their normal track. It in effect, has stolen their words and has rendered them speechless.

And the books... yes she has always put so much faith in books and finding the answers in them that she is struggling terribly in not finding them helpful in her loss.

I'm so humbled at your words of being 'realistic' in bringing them together so swiftly. These two have quarreled all their lives and here they are with this mutual devistating experience that changes everything. I'm so thankful that you feel that it can truly bring them together. I think most people who do not ship Draco/Hermione struggle with believability. So it is a true compliment that you give me in saying that it can happen.

And thank you lastly for calling my writings "art." It means so much to me. I cannot thank you enough. It means a lot.

Thank you for your repeated reviews of my work. They truly help keep me going.

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper


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