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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Hello! First let me just say that I very much enjoyed this chapter and found your summary to pull me in. I liked how you started it off, with that dream and then slowly transitioning to real life. I felt that the flow of the story was really smooth and honestly I couldn't really find much to comment on needing improvement. I think something that could add to your story even more would be some more description. The reason I think this is that until the end of this chapter when you state that her birthday is right before they go back to school I had been thinking that they were already at school what with Millie running into James and Sirius on the stairs so I'm not really sure where they are at and why the boys are there as well. Other than this one piece of information though everything else seemed to flow really well and was very understandable. I look forward to reading more of this story some time. Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for liking my summary! I totally suck at them, and I think I've rewritten the one for this story about five times - so yay!

And seriously? Nothing to improve upon? Wow! Such a lovely compliment! I'm truly flattered!

And yes - I've been told about my description, or lack thereof. And I didn't even realise that I don't mention where they are until the very end. How very awkward!

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