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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm from the review tag!

I'm really glad that you're showing the less than perfect side to James and Lily's relationship, as though many potray as perfect I highly doubt it was! I thought Lily's despair over Harry was great as it showed that she wasn't always calm and collected, and even wizards can't always handle babies!

I like how you included Butterscotch, as many people do forget that Lily did mention having a cat in her letter to Sirius, so even though it was a minor detail plot wise it was nice to see that included :)

I thought it was a nice idea to make Lily a piano player, as I can imagine her being quite musical given her muggle roots, and it would definitely soothe a baby!

Overall I really enjoyed this one-shot as it was comparatively different to many others I have read in a good way! It provided a different and often ignored perspective to Lily and James's relationship! Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hi m'dear!

I'm so happy you enjoyed this one shot. I really love writing about the times in Lily and James's life when things like this did happen. They weren't always these incredible war heroes, these beyond brave people who lived and died as saints... sometimes they were just two parents who really sort of wanted to get a moment of piece and for their child to just stop crying :P

Thank you so much for stopping by and reviewing, and for the lovely compliments ♥

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