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Review:patronus_charm says:
I really love this story, so I decided to review chapter 4 as well :D

Helga just gets more and more lovely with each chapter, that scene with Mary just showed exactly what being a Hufflepuff was all about. Helga and Salazar what an interesting couple, right? Beforehand I would have said they are the most unlikely pairing, but since reading your story I can see how they may have ended up together. I thought there scene together was really adorable.

I was glad you included a school scene, because they are at Hogwarts, and if you didn't I think the story may have started to become a bit detatched from the school. So just include a scene or two per chapter so it will stay believable.

Hm, Salazar's afraid of flames, and I always associated that with the Gryffindor house. Maybe their hatred for one another lies deeper than previously thought?

I think the plots coming along great and it's really believable. It certainly makes you want to read on as you provide the right amount of action and information so they balance one another out well :) Great job! Kiana

Author's Response: You are just too awesome. Haha, I'm going to get spoiled with all these extra reviews :P

Since you just suggested in your review for chapter 3 that I add more about the school itself, I'm really happy you liked the scene with Mary. I'll definitely take your advice and keep sprinkling that kind of thing in :) And I wondered how people would react to Helga and Salazar being romantically involved, because they are so different. But like you said, I think that's what makes them interesting. I'm happy you liked their little moment in this chapter!

The flames will be explained in the next few chapters, so I won't give anything away about that. All will be revealed soon though, don't worry.

I'll definitely be re-requesting again from you! I'm so happy you're enjoying this, and I love getting a new review from you :) Thanks again, Kiana!

--Maggie


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