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Review:Alexa says:
I quite enjoyed your story. You had several plots going on with several twists that it was hard to predict what was going to happen. That's usually rare for fanfiction, so congratulations on achieving that. The one thing I have to stress is your spelling and grammar. That's the one thing that I think will hold you back. Presents are something you open on your birthday and presence is when someone is in the vicinity. Throughout the story you made a lot of spelling mistakes. I'm pretty sure you also meant the character Rodolphus who was in fact married to Bellatrix. Now that I've gotten that off my chest, I still wanted to say good job. Usually spelling mistakes make me leave a story, but the plot line made me stay and finish it. You have a lot of potential. If you are planning anymore stories, I would get someone to look over the spelling. Someone that will pick up on them. I remember reading in one chapter that you had someone look over them, but they didn't change some of the mistakes. I hope I wasn't too hard on you and good luck with future stories :).

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