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Review:True Author says:
Beth's emotions were the best part of this chapter. She couldn't transform into a falcon when she tried, Severus was almost dead, it was full moon and she couldn't believe Sirius did this. Poor Beth, no wonder she cried. :( That's obvious, wasn't it?
The awkward breakfast was nice. ;)

Ashwini

Author's Response: I actually really like the emotions in this chapter -- they just felt very right and natural when I was writing it, which I can remember even now -- and it's great to hear that you liked them, too! She did kind of have a breakdown at the end, of course, but like you said, that's probably not that unexpected after everything she just went through. ;)

It's still making me so happy to see that you're continuing on with this story. It's so awesome that you're still reading! ♥ Thank you very much, Ashwini!!


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