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Review:RowlingsGirls_22 says:
I'm sooo cooonnnfffuuussseeeddd!!! How do they know it's each other? I thought it was illegal to tell the pen-pal who you are. Is it just me or does some of it not add up... Please help me understand this and don't make me re-read the story, it takes too much effort.

Your story is wonderful, other than what I don't understand. There are a few punctuational errors that I spotted but then again, who doesn't? Just make sure that one day you come backand fix it. Don't worry the errors that I spotted aren't sooo ridiculous that it ruins the flow of the story, it's just a period here, a comma there type of thing.

-DracosCookie

Author's Response: Hey. Sorry you didn't get it. There were plenty of clues for the two of them to figure it out without telling each other. Draco saw Hermione using the christmas present that Damien got for Grace. Um, Hermione noticed that both Draco and Damien claim to be scared of horse-like creatures. Other character similarities. Grace's break from letter writing corresponded with Hermione going home to see her mom. Etc. Hope that clears it up. Thanks for the review!

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