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Review:blackthoughtsredwriting says:
Another wonderful chapter. May I make a suggestion though. Usually it doesn't bother me but it feels like this story is missing something. Idk if it's the short chapters or what but maybe try to make the chapters a little bit more in depth/longer. Don't get me wrong i'm loving the story so far. It's just the stories I like, i like them to be really long so I don't finish them to fast. I probably sound like a douche now. lol. I know sometimes, it's difficult to make long chapters. I myself have that problem, but it makes for a better reading experience in my opinion.

Well it was another very good chapter despite the briefness of it. Good job

Author's Response: Yes, I've been meaning to go back and re-write the story. I might do that for Camp NaNoWriMo. And it's alright. I love when people tell me their opinions. The truth is, I usually have different versions of each chapter I write, and pick the one that suits the story best. Writer's Block is also a big problem. Thanks for the reviews, though; they really help me!
~Magicalis Writer

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