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Review:The Misfit says:
*runs off to apologize to the neighbour for frightening her with my screams of "JAMES ALEXANDER POTTER, HOW COULD YOU?!"* :3 (She was in the garden and I was sitting next to the window, which I had forgotten was open. Whoops.)

I seriously can't believe James right now - I know he's a teenage boy and prone to be stupid, but I was just falling in love with the mature James and plotting how I could steal him from Lily - don't tell her I said that! ;) - when he did something like that. Having been in Beth's position more than once, I can totally empathize with her. And Remus was right - James shouldn't have told any of them, especially Sirius. Merlin, what was he thinking?

On a much more positive note, I especially liked the way you made Lily a part of the group - it's nice for Beth to have another girl to talk to, and it's fun to see Lily's personality develop from when we saw her in her fifth year in canon. Her interest and new perspective on Quidditch just because her boyfriend was playing was so uplifting! XD

And the Snabeth feels that I'm having right now are asdfghjkl!! *jaw drops* Severus and Beth had their first proper conversation! Severus and Beth had their first proper conversation! You can tell how excited I am there. ;) I seem to be identifying with Beth more and more as this story progresses, to be completely honest with you. "She almost forgot, in her buoyancy, that she was mad at her friends Ė giddiness was rapidly replacing any ill feelings she was harboring. She didnít mind at all." < That basically just describes me right now. ♥

Author's Response: That first paragraph made me laugh SO much, I hope you know -- even reading it again a week later, I'm still laughing! :D Your poor neighbor... but if she's ever read a piece of fan fiction in her life, then she'll understand, I'm sure.

Aaand this is one of those times I mentioned where James regresses right back into his somewhat less mature self. :P I've been in a position before where it's been blabbed that I like someone, too, so I totally emphasize with her here. To be fair, Sirius was a brat about it, but I think the point is that James definitely WASN'T thinking! Boys. What are we going to do with them?

I'm glad you like Lily here, though! Incorporating her in was a bit tricky, because I don't see her as automatically becoming one of them -- especially with all her past animosity towards James. Beth did need a bit of female friendship, I suppose. ;)

First proper conversation indeed! Took them long enough, yeah? Ah, perhaps they're just sticking to the old adage and taking it slow... but only time will tell! :D Thank you so much for yet another amazing review. I really can't tell you how much it means to me to have these. ♥


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