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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hi there! Sorry about the wait, but better late than never :D

As you know, I review as I read, so disjointedness is a risk :P

The memory is so cute! The kiss in the rain has to be one of my favourite 'romancey things' to read! I like how Dominique knows its wrong but she still doesn't care! Shows how much she loves Teddy!

That is lasted seven months without them getting caught is amazing, especially seeing as Dominique is Victoire's sister! Her description of being the 'Older Woman' was very good! Its how I imagine being the 'Other Woman' would feel!

Heartbreaking ending! Poor Dom! When I read 'Betrayal' I thought Dom deserved everything she got, sleeping with her sisters boyfriend! But now I see that she loves Teddy every bit as much as Victoire does! And that is just heartbreaking!

Brilliant story! If you ever need another review, you know where I am! :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing! And don't worry about the delay, that's okay! My apologies for the delay in responding too!

I am glad you liked the kiss-in-the-rain. I was worried it was too cliche or you'd hate Dominique for it, but glad you took the positive angle and decided to focus on how much she loves Teddy!

Haha, well the fact that Dom and Vic dont live together did help things, though of course it was an awful thing to do. I was worried the "other woman" part was slightly melodramatic but I am happy you found it good!

Yeah, it broke my heart as well while writing the end to this - as well as to Betrayal - both the sisters love Teddy a lot, and it is really a shame that Teddy is kind of selfish to string both of them along, and then leave one for the other.

Thanks again for your lovely review, and I'll surely re-request if I need to!

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