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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh wow! This is a really good chapter and beginning for your story! I really felt for George here, as I did in the actual series when Fred's death came. You did a wonderful job of painting this picture for me, and I could really see exactly what you were describing to us. I love how for just a moment, George decides that he wants to be Fred but then his brother comes along and ruins that for him by admitting to Lee that Fred is gone. I only found one mistake and it was right towards the end when you say "I must've had been sitting on the floor" the word had is extra and disrupts the flow of the sentence. But other than that small thing, there was nothing else that seemed out of place or disrupted the flow. I very much enjoyed this! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for your lovely review :) I'm glad you liked it, and managed to really feel for George. It;s quite a horrible moment for him, really. And unfortunately, that's just the beginning of everything for George :(

Thanks for pointing that sentence out! I do have trouble with my tenses sometimes :)

Thanks again for you review!

-teh


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