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Review:CassiePotter says:
Gabbie this was amazing!!! You know how much I love Ben, so reading something that really let us into his mindset was fascinating! I really loved how conflicted he was in his thoughts about Roxanne. He's not sure how he feels about her, or how he should feel about her, and I love how much he's aware of it. I also loved the moment at the end when they were talkin about their families and he wished he could have a family like the Weasleys. It was really sweet, and showed us a bit of vulnerability from Ben, which is rare, I think. I just loved seeing him with Roxanne again! And the fact that they're a little bit younger makes this even more fun! Wonderful, wonderful work! ASOS is next up from me, and then I'm back to TFD! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Welcome back, Cassie! I've missed you and your awesome reviews! *Hands fat kitten*
I really love this one-shot, it was so much easier for me to write and I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. I think this entire piece is mostly about Ben's feelings for Roxanne and how conflicted he is about his own emotions. Ben is the sort of person who's aware of his emotions more than Roxanne so it was fun to explore that side him too. The differences between them were really apparent when they were talking about their families. It showed just how much their worlds could never intertwine the way that Ben would, probably want. Vulnerability from Ben is going to be very rare, he's so guarded that I don't think he'll give me those scenes willingly. The jerk. Hehehe.
I'm hopefully going to get Abandon up there after a while. I have the next chapter done already, I'm just waiting on Audrey to be up there and then you'll finally get A Force of Wills and know Blaise's fate. >:D
After that, I guess I'm going back to Albus but that depends on my mood. :p
Thanks again for coming back and can't wait for ASOS! Look out for Audrey and Percy tomorrow hopefully (If it isn't rejected for its raunchiness.)
Much love,

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