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Review:Jchrissy says:
Tori is really a bit of a terrible girl. isn't she? It's past wanting to be popular and get what she wants, I don't see anything wrong with trying to strive for what you want. But she goes way past that to hurt others to benefit herself, and gah. I like what you're doing with her though.. giving us a look into her real thoughts and showing us who she is, while the remainder of the school continues to adore her. It's frustrating while still being very compelling. I just want everyone to find out what a terrible person she seems to be :P.

And now she's thinking of sinking her claws into Albus? Hmm.. not going to happen, missy. Or, at least I hope not. But it seems that we're getting some ideas of what James doesn't want Charlie talking to Albus... hmmm.

Another interesting chapter, m'dear!

Author's Response: Tori is definitely an...interesting character, though she also has a backstory, which will be revealed in later chapters. However, you're right, I definitely want other characters to just see her for who she is!

Poor Albus. He's just so innocent and not.

Thanks again for the review!

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