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Review:AlexFan says:
I like the fact that Remus is separate from the werewolf. Like the werewolf is someone different who lives inside Remus and occasionally comes out to breathe air before going back into hiding.

I think I've said that before but oh well, the point still stands.

I'd never thought of Remus and his werewolf as being two separate people and it was really awesome to see that and I also liked the fact that Wolf is kind of like Remus's conscious except not really.

I'm hoping that makes sense.

My favourite thing about this chapter was probably the fact that Remus/Wolf still protected his friends (or at least Sirius) even if he didn't know that they were his friends.

Just a little tip for future references but make sure that you don't accidentally end up typing a different word other than what you meant. It's happened to everyone.

For example: "which seemed to be hanging on for DEAF life."

I'm pretty sure that you mean "dear life" there and not "deaf life".

Something that I found in this fanfiction that I haven't found in other FF's is that in this we're told exactly how the Marauder's came up with their nicknames for each other. In other fanfictions there's usually no explanation given and it's just assumed and such.

It was also great that I was told as a reader exactly HOW they found out about Remus. Again, I haven't seen this in other fanfictions (or if I have, they weren't very detailed or specific.)

Anyway, I'd give this a 10/10 so great job on the chapter!

Author's Response: Heya!!

So yes, Remus and Wolf are indeed sharing a body and they hate it. Remus thinks that Wolf is a disease while Wolf thinks that Remus is a nuisance because he only gets to come out one night. And you're right, Remus IS there every full moon...but not really. I get it, so don't worry.

Wolf protects Sirius a lot more because he's another canine just like him...but inferior, at least according to Wolf.

Ugh, I hate silly mistakes like that! Glad you were able to catch on it! I'll go ahead and make the change on it right now.

The part where they're coming up with the names, I think, is one of my favorite parts. Mr. Hooves part made me giggle.

Thank you so much for coming over to review this! I really appreciate it!

Until Next time

--Rosie

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