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Review:Lin says:
First of all, never use the term brunette when describing a guy, it's sexist, I know, but the term is purely for women. In English, we say brown-haired boy, same goes for blonde. Male form is blond-haired or blond boy. Also, in a story, once the character's or characters name(s) is/are introduced, you must begin referring to them by their names, it is annoying as well as incorrect to continue referring to them as blond-haired, messy-haired, black-haired etcetera.
Other than that, love the story so far, and keep up the good work!!
Yours Truly
Linda M.
P.S. The rating shown is NOT my rating, I prefer not to rate people's stories on the internet, and so I left it at the auto rating.
Hope you read that

Author's Response: I didn't know that... Thanks for the pointers! =D

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