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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm avec your requested review!

I loved this opening I thought the sadness was beautifully written and you could almost feel their pain resonating through out it. It was also interesting to show how Charlie acted differently towards grief then how I thought he would have acted.

I liked how you wrote about Bill and Charlie's special bond as I always thought they were really close considering they were always the more mature and cool ones of the Weasley siblings. It also showed how Percy was always really the outsider never part of the younger clique and never part of this bond. I guess with that you could understand why he acted the way he did.

I'm glad you chose to write this from Charlie's point of view as I've never really read many stories about him, though it's mean to say he is the most forgotten about Weasley as he rarely features in the books. This is great though as we know relatively little about him you can have so much more creativity and imagination when writing about him.

I thought the length was perfect as if you carrried on writing it would have taken away the specialness this chapter had. I also think it flowed very well and it was very easy as you didn't get lost or bored!

I really enjoyed this story so keep it up! Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing this for me; and for doing it so quickly!!

I'm really glad that you loved the opening!! :)

I hadn't really thought about that before, but you're right; this does really show how Percy was kind of an outside... it kind of makes me pity him, now that I think about it. :( I'm thrilled that you liked how I wrote about Bill and Charlie's bond, though!!

I agree that there aren't many Charlie-love fics out there, which is part of the reason I chose to write about him. As you said, it leaves me more room to be creative! :D

I'm glad you found the length and flow to be good! Thank you SO MUCH!!


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