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Review:HP will never die says:
AH No! This is the second time I've read this but this bit still gets me so frustrated and sad :( :( Laura and Sirius are so good together and they've only been together for a tiny bit and now this... It's so depressing. Why did you have to put this bit in???
But don't think I'm being mean and critisising (is that spelt right?) you. It's amazing that you can write such a gripping story that I get so into it.
I love your style and you have portrayed the marauders and lily so well. Sometimes I read fanfictions and I don't think that people have interpreted characters the right way from what JK has given us. But this is so believable. I can really see that this is the Sirius and the Lupin we know.
Plus your own original characters are so good too! I just love this story. It's definitely one of the best - if not the best - fanfiction I've ever read.
Anyway, onwards! I have to read some more! :) :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, as I'm sure you appreciate I did have to put that argument in, because otherwise it would have been a bit too unrealistic with the sunshine-and-lollipops type of scenario. Plus you needed to have the talk a couple of chapters down the track to really sort out those trust issues our Laura has. But yes, it's a huge compliment to me that you are so involved with my characters, and to have you say they feel just like the the JKR ones (canon characters at least) is really amazing. Thanks again!

cheers, Mel


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