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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello it's me again!

I loved the amount of detail you went into for the restaurant as it sounded so lovely and beautiful! You wanted to be able to sit there among the pyramids and the scenes of India.

It was funny seeing how insecure George was about Angelina and Terrence. Usually he's relatively cool, collected and confident so seeing him nervous and the butt of jokes was hilarious. I like the twist as it makes George have hidden depths you wouldn't have thought he would have had.

You can see why George is so insecure as Terrence is older, more mature, intelligent and Angelina's boyfriend you can't help but want George to gain Angelina so the underdog can win.

Again I noticed a few misplaced capitals, but that's just a minor thing and easy to fix so you shouldn't worry to much!

Kiana :)

Author's Response: Hey!

Thanks for the reviews, they were really nice and you're too sweet. :)
I absolutely love that you enjoyed the descriptions of the restaurant. I tried to make it as authentic and real as I could, so it could set the scene a bit more. Sometimes I get lazy and go on and on about a building so I don't have to get back to the characters. But shssh, don't tell anyone else that! ;)
Poor George. Seeing Angelina with Terrence just sort of tore him up a little and having him put out of his element really made it more fun, for me anyway. Poor him, though. Hhehehe.
I think George has more hidden depths than anyone would have thought, which makes him so much fun and hard to write for. We know so much about Fred from the books but not enough about his twin, which was always a little unfair to me. So playing around with his emotions is going to be a journey that I'm all too happy to take. I'm foolishly in love with him. :D
Terrence is everything that George is not and I wanted to make that bluntly obvious. It makes you want to root for him though, doesn't it? You want Angelina to forget about her boyfriend and just snog George right? Well. We'll see if that happens or not. ;)
Knowing me, though, it won't.
Argh...more grammar things? I'll have to go in and clean them up! Thanks again for the review lovely!
Much love,

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