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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was a nice start to your story. I liked your characterisation of Lysander. He does seem to be Luna and Rolf's son xP I like the whole way you set the story in this chapter utilising your scenes :) This seems to be a fun story!

There were some grammar typos here and there though. Like, there was no need for the apostrophes in "screw’s", "Potter’s" and "Weasley’s". But anyway, apart from that, this flowed pretty smooth.

Good work!
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: This story was really my first attempt at writing something funny and silly. I love this story and will hopefully return to it again soon! I know its in need of a touch up to get those errors straightened out so thank you for pointing them out. I will hopefully be able to come back and work on this story more. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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