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Review:adluvshp says:
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Oh dear this was so heartbreaking :( You got George's emotions across so well. The entire narrative was thick with loss, grief, and despair and I could really feel all the intensity. I think you wrote this in a very realistic way, I can envision this happening to poor George :( The way you wrote your narrative was also quite suited to the story, it was as if George was shattered that his thoughts were too. The ending was really impacting as well. All in all, this was such a powerful, sad, and grief-filled chapter which was very well-written. I am sure the onward chapters are equally good!

Great going!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello there AD :D

Thanks for your lovely review. I'm glad you found this a realistic but intense story. I was really trying to write a convincing narrative from George's POV, and we all know all that shock and loss and grief poor George has to go through :(

Thanks again for reading :)

-teh


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