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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi m'dear! I wanted to come by to thank you for your awesome review! And I'm so happy I did because this first chapter was wonderfully intriguing!

So! We have Alexa's brother and Dom (male form) in a relationship with one another-- Alexa would be Scorpius's cousins... I think. She's Daphne's daughter... Okay. Yes. Haha sorry, just getting everything set on my head.

I love that you've given her a very healthy dose of fear when it comes to starting your own life. I think everyone either feels that way before they leave or shorty after when they realize how stressful the real world can be :P

Ohhh and it seems that Al's substance induced confidence has pushed him to try and take a step further in their relationship/friendship. And despite Alexa's feeble attempt to cool things down.. Uh oh!

And I can already tell just where we're going with your AN.. I have to say that I love the irony of at the start of this chapter Alexa is worrying about having to grow up and start a real life, and by the end it seems she's just made her adult life a whole heck of a lot more adult.. Or it will be in nine months ;)

Excellent start, m'dear!!

Author's Response: Hello!

Yep, Kieron and a male Dom (love for French gender neutral names :P) are together. Kieron and Alexa are Scorpius' cousins, making Daphne their mother.

The fear was just a natural part to write, I just didn't think about the irony until I re-read it. It's something that I'm coming to realise myself, so it was easy, I guess. :)

Alcohol is not a friend to Al... Or Lexi... Or any of my characters really. It makes them do crazy things. ;)

Thank you so much for the lovely review. I was pleasantly surprised to see this. :D


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