Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:harrietm says:
I really enjoyed reading this whole story :) The idea of best friends eventually falling in love is pretty cliched and in a way perhaps the leap from friends to lovers was too seamless in the seventh year chapters...but that makes me really like the imperfect ending. I also really loved your originality of skipping between different time periods, the flashbacks had some of my favourite moments because the description of them was so perfect. And I loved what you did with all the characters - they were all very readable and relateable. Amelia and James really were a fabulous couple...so I'm still Team James as I start reading Sunshine!
Brilliant work, don't stop writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know, I was working with some pretty overused material, but I tried to make it original with the funky structure and hopefully the realistic ending (I definitely wouldn't stay with someone who had cheated on me!). Plus doing a short story collection meant I didn't have to faff around with real character development or filler chapters or anything like that!

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm glad you're going on to read Sunshine! Enjoy!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 645
Submit Report: