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Review:ms4aisa says:
AH! They have a date!!! :D :D (I don't care that Tash thinks it isn't a date, because it totally is!)
such an amazing chapter of this wonderful story!! I truly love it, it's so good! I love how the characters developed and especially the friendship between James and Natasha, so good! The only thing that annoys me is Natasha being unable to make decisions on her own, but I think it's supposed to annoy me :) But she slowly cracks through that, I mean she agreed on a date with James, which she not only isn't 'allowed' to do but which also will bring a lot of good and bad attention to her. So that being said, I cannot wait for the next chapter!! please update soon! (like now! :) )
love the story so much, you're really a great writer! but (as I said) please please update soon. I can't wait! :)

Author's Response: Ahaha yes they do have a semi-date! Look how much development has occurred :)

I'm so happy you like the story and the characters. I've definitely put a lot of time and effort into them, so it's nice that they're appreciated. Yeah Tash's lack of decision making is annoying, and that's the point. It's her fatal flaw that needs to be fixed during the story. It's kind of the main plot.

I'm so flattered you think I'm a great writing and thank you so much for reviewing :)

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