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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Tag!'s odd, reading this after reading Betrayal, when I was supposed to read it first, and it's interesting to see Dom's perspective of the whole muddle. In Betrayal, I felt really horrible for Victoire but here...well, my heart was aching for Dom, to tell you the truth!

You have a really lovely style of writing that just hooks me in. I was captivated from the very first sentence and loved everything about this one-shot. Your characterizations were spot on, descriptions and details perfect...and everything was SO believable. Everything that Teddy said was so real, and I could almost feel Dom's pain.

I really, really enjoyed this-great job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I always do like your short & sweetly thoughtful reviews :)

I know that it might have been a little weird reading Ending It after instead of before Betrayal, but lets just treat them as stand-alones shall we? xD

I was aiming for the readers to feel for Dom in this fic, just like I was aiming to feel for Vic in Betrayal, so its good to know that it had the desired effect in both!

Naw thanks, I am so flattered by hearing (or reading) you say that my style of writing hooks you, thanks.

I am so happy you enjoyed this! Thanks!

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