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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! :)

Wow. This is so amazing. I had to put it in my favourites straight away. It's beautiful, haunting and intriguing -everything a prologue should be, or so I think. I really liked how it was written in second person, it really adds to the atmosphere of the story, and I haven't read a lot of second person stories here at HPFF so I'm really loving all of this so far.

Molly's illness intrigues me so much. I'm thinking a spirit in the book she's always carrying around has decided to live in her body or something like that. But then, it could be something totally different from that. Argh. The possibilities are limitless.

This was such an amazing read! Everything about it is just so perfect. I'm definitely going to back for more really soon! ♥


16th review out of 100.

Author's Response: Hey, there! Gosh, thanks so much! :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it - it's still kinda my baby, even though it's been up/in progress for a while. The second person was difficult at first, but it's got a lot easier now... and I know, there's hardly any! I'd never read or written anything in second person either before writing this, so it was a bit of a learning curve... I'm glad you think it works, though! :)

Mm... you know, no one else has suggested exactly that, I don't think. Curious. Of course, I can't say if you're right or not, so... maybe yes, maybe no ;) But it is a good theory. I like it, lol.

Thank you so much for the lovely review! :)

Aph xx

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