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Review:Azure Seas says:
Hey~ I've got one or two things to say before I continue reading. The first is a bit of constructive criticism - please, always try to make sure the reader can tell who's saying what. I got a little lost a few times, especially when Hermione's lines and Draco's actions were on the same line.
Secondly, I really like this story, and it seems pretty plausible to me... Maybe just throw in a few more descriptive details?
Whatever you do, please keep writing!

Author's Response: I hope you find that I corrected that issue in future chapters. I just haven't gone back and edited the beginning chapters. Hope you like it better further on. Thanks for the review!

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