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Review:CherryBoom says:
Well, that was a very emotional start for sure. There are not many Charlie fics around, so Charlie/OC is completely new territory for me. While we don't know much about Charlie from books, this scene certainly felt like a natural continuance to the battle of Hogwarts.

I liked Charlie's and Bill's brother-to-brother talk. It would be quite like the Weasleys to lean on each other when the disaster strikes. They are after all such a tight-knit family. I'm quite looking forward to learn more about Bill in upcoming chapters, since he seems to be the closest to Charlie. Arthur felt natural as a grieving father, and while we got only a short glimpse of others, it's perfectly understandable that Charlie shuts them out and just tries to get through it before breaking down.

It's pretty sad that he blames for himself for Fred's death. I don't remember from books, if he was in that particular battle, but since he was all the way in Romania, it's no wonder if came too late there.

Your writing was smooth and the flow was good throughout the chapter. It was an ideal starting point for a fic since it changes Charlie's life so much right from the start. I'm quite interested to see how you will introduce your OC to this fic.

It was a good read, and when I've more time, I will return to it and read more. =)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review this!!

Haha; I agree, this is a very emotional start. I got all emotional just writing it! :P And you're right, there aren't many Charlie fics out there... that's part of the reason I chose Charlie as the canon character... it gives me a little more lead-way as an author. I can play with events and characters somewhat while still making it believable!

Haha; everyone likes the Bill/Charlie love going on in this chapter! It actually came across much better than I thought it would, which is awesome!! And I'm so glad that Arthur and Charlie's reactions felt natural and believable!!

Yes, it's terrible that Charlie blames himself for Fred's death. You'll find out more about whether or not Charlie was in the battle in the next chapter! :) *winks*

EEk! I'm so excited that it's got you interested!! I look forward to reading more of your amazing and thoughtful reviews!!

Thank you SO MUCh!


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