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Review:twitchy_pigeons says:
Excellent story, sorry I didn't comment on any of the chapters. While you do have some spelling issues, the story was wonderful. The ending on the other hand, is simply depressing. You have a sequel? Well, I can find that myself lol.

Your portrayal of Benjamin was quite effective in establishing his overpowering and quite evil presence. I definitely liked the parts with Remus and Marta together, and the cheering charm incidents, and so on. :) I really do wish that somehow the story would have worked out for Marta and Remus to be together, but not everything can have the happy Hollywood ending unfortunately.

Overall, well done. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I know, I still have spelling problems, but I do my best to fix them before I post. I hope they weren't too distracting for you. This wasn't the original ending for the story (the original was going to be just as depressing through), but I'm happy with it despite the grim tone. Besides, this way gave me a chance to even write a sequel to which I do hope you might like!

Thank you for your comments about Benjamin. I had never written someone this evil before in my life, fan fiction or original, so I'm glad I pulled this off as well as I did. Remus and Marta were so easy to write together, so I'm also saddened that I couldn't have them together for very long. Sadly, my desire to keep my stories as canon as possible helped push me towards the ending you just read.

Thank you so much for your review! It really means a lot to me!

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