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Review:EstrellaBella says:
Hey, sorry that this is so late - I only just saw your comment on my status and was so happy to realise you'd left me a review! :D
I really enjoyed this. I'm not normally a Jily fan because it's always been so repetetive whenever I've read anything involving them but this was nice and original. I like that you haven't decided to focus on the actually getting together; it's much more fun leaving that bit for the reader to think about. I always find that the signs are a lot more entertaining than the actual declarations of love anyway. I practically melted when James told her that he'd be waiting for her...how sweet. His obviously unrequited love for Lily is the only quality I've ever really liked about James - everything else makes him seem like a total git. However I like how you've convinced me to like him with other realistic attributes that I never considered him having. Like how he flung himself in front of that bludger like a true gryffindor. Ok, he did it to win the game rather than to be chivalrous but still, it made me respect him.
Your characterisation overall was really spot on. I missed the marauders and the Sirius-James banter but that's just a reflection of my own personal taste. I still really enjoyed this and its going straight into my favourites.

EB

Author's Response: Hello :)

No problem :) Thanks for leaving me a lovely review!!

I'm glad I converted you to liking the lovely mature James I love so much :) In my head he's a huge sweetie as well as brave like the true Gryffindor and I'm glad I showed this through the story!

I must admit I did miss not having the other marauders there but I didn't want to take away what the story was ultimately about: James and Lily!

Thank you again for an amazingly lovely review and I was so happy it's one of your favourites! *blushes*

Lauren

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