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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :)

I saw your status and I'm SO happy I came to take a look!

This is such a powerful and amazing one-shot! Although to be honest it did creep me out! I loved how you didn't give us the identity of the girl until the very last part - I was trying to guess all the way through! I was thinking it would be Hermione or Astoria for most of the time but I was obviously wrong! Well done - that is such a hard thing to do and you did it amazingly!

I was really feeling quite sorry for Draco. For someone who is so proud it must have really hurt his ego to have someone leave him. The letters though made me wonder if something else was going on. They really built up the tension to the finale.

OMG he killed her?!?! I couldn't believe what I was reading!! It was such a huge twist - I mean, like I said, I was expecting something but that was just shocking and added to the creep factor!

Ok the last few lines? Amazing. I love how you repeated the words on the letter and then did the same at the end. It gave the whole thing a real haunted feel; like it's the echo that remains of Pansy. Beautifully written!

Please write the other one-shots! They would be so good! The stories far too intriguing to leave here!

Lauren

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