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Review:cypress says:
Ok, I have one critique, and that is, you should really consider editing your A/N. You are not "incompetent," and there's no reason for you to put yourself down. The fragments are fine. This was easy to follow and read. Again, I loved it. Wonderful imagery, very vivid. I love him tasting colours. You did a very good job of writing this, and I liked the chapter's progression. You may be happy to know I didn't cry this time, but I came fairly close. This is a fantastic interpretation of the aftermath of the war, and on George's reaction. I'm leaving it there, as it is late, I am tired, and I have real work to do for work that I must tend to. I look forward to reading more of your stuff, so feel free to request reviews in the future as you write new chapters or stories. :)

All the best,
cypress

Author's Response: Thanks for the third review xD

I know, I know, I have terrible self-esteem with my writing :( I'm so glad you didn't find the fragments irritating at all. I always love reading stories about the aftermath of war so I just adore the post-Hogwarts era :D

I'll certainly be writing more chapters soon and OF COURSE I'll come by and re-request :D

Thanks thanks and thanks once again!

-teh


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