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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello! Here with your requested review :)

I was right!! Haha I'm actually quite shocked - I just thought I was being daft but I don't care as I loved the twist! It was great! When he thought she was 'the girl from last night' and starting giving excuses I was cringing so bad! Talk about awkward!

As a character though you certainly have made him very interesting! Clearly he has a drinking problem - I'm really excited to see where you're going to take this from here.

As always huge compliments to your Edie. She is amazing and has me laughing all the way through! I love Dean and Seamus too though and the little bro-lationship they have going on. It's all so perfect and well written! When Seamus casually strolled into the bar and proceeded to make things a lot worse I couldn't help but laugh!

Hmm so Edie's going to be taking out a lot on poor Oliver. I really hope something changes her mind!

Another amazing chapter as always! Looking forward to reading more!!

Lauren

Author's Response: Hello there! Yay, you were right! Actually I think you're the first person--at least out of those who mentioned it--who saw it coming. So you win! :)

I love love love love LOVE writing awkward moments... I think it's because they happen so regularly to myself that it just comes as second nature. And throwing Seamus into the mix is almost second nature to me as well ;D

Thank you so very much for the review. I really appreciate it.


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