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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's your review from the review tag!

I was really confused about who the narrator was. So in the end I checked the reviews and saw it was James. I'm still kinda undecided over whether I liked that or not. I loved the ambiguity of it though out reading it. However I just assumed it would be revealed at the end so it was kinda disappointing it wasn't.

Overall I thought this was really original and I really enjoyed reading it. It just shows how deeply Sirius and James's friendship as it shows how much both were lost and hurting with out one another. I would have thought something more may have been occuring if it wasn't for the last line. I thought this brought some fresh perspective to a story I love and I really enjoyed reading this new perspective :)

Author's Response: Hey!

I did actually put in a tiny little reference to the narrator near the end - he starts to address his little stream-of-consciousness to Sirius and mentions him by name - but it's a blink-and-you-miss-it moment. Sorry about that.

Despite that, I'm very happy that you liked it, because I had tons of fun writing this despite its weird pairings. Thank you so much for your review! :)


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